Saw your post in the forums. I'll be the guy to throw you a bone because I know what it's like starting at the bottom.
Cool sounds. I see you couldn't really figure out a genre, but I would classify this as hardstyle. It's very mixed up and seems 'jumbled' I would say with a few diffrent FX thrown in here and there.
I would recomend putting together some kind of composition. Intro, Verse, Chorus, Verse Outtro and so on. Good first song though.